From my original story that is an older version

"Conner are you cleaning your room or are you day dreaming again?" Said a kid called Conner's mom. "I'm cleaning mom" said Conner Which he really wasn't. He started cleaning his room and found a Pirits of the Caribien Simulater and after he finished cleaning his room, He invited his friend Luke over to play his game.

Conner
"Conner, Would you like something to eat?" Asked Luke while they were playing there game. "Sure." Said Conner. Just as Luke was making a snack for them Conner got sucked right into the game. After Luke done making a snack he went upstairs and he to got sucked in the game too.








"Where are we" Asked Conner. "Can't you see? Were in the game. "Oh, now that makes sence. BUT CAN'T YOU SEE THAT THAT'S INPOSSIBULL!!!!!!!!!" yelled Conner. "whos there said a quit girls voice. "SHHHHH" Said Luke. Conner was covering his mouth and freaking out. They soon realized that they were not alone.














"Oh, Hi" said the girl in a whisper. " My name is Lilly and there holding me hosteg. Who are you and why are you here in this dangerous place."
"Hi, I'm Conner and this here is Luke. We don't really now how or why we are here. But we do know that we are in a pirit ship.". They were. Lilly was very beutiful. They saw why she was kidnapped.

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From my original story that is an older version

"Conner are you cleaning your room or are you day dreaming again?" Said a kid called Conner's mom. "I'm cleaning mom" said Conner Which he really wasn't. He started cleaning his room and found a Pirits of the Caribien Simulater and after he finished cleaning his room, He invited his friend Luke over to play his game.

Conner
"Conner, Would you like something to eat?" Asked Luke while they were playing there game. "Sure." Said Conner. Just as Luke was making a snack for them Conner got sucked right into the game. After Luke done making a snack he went upstairs and he to got sucked in the game too.
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