In order to making this novel into a children's book. I had to change adult topics into topics a kid can read. In the novel Frank molested woman. In my children's book I changed that into Frank casting a spell on them. The spell causes the woman to loose their strength and beauty, and those are similar effects that happen to someone after they get raped. I also changed Frank committing suicide into him casting a spell on himself. These events in the novel were topics that would not appear in a children's book. So substituted them with topics children actually read.

72 years ago in the year of 1948,I lived in a little town, Bentrock, Montana. I was 12 years old and lived in a large country home. I lived with my mom, my dad, and my babysitter Marie Little Soldier.




Marie Little Soldier is my beautiful babysitter whom I love deeply. She lives with us, so I get to see her a lot.


I hear Marie Little Soldier coughing down the hall, so I go and see her. She is coughing loudly, so I start to get a little scared.


My mother and father both agree to call my uncle Frank Hayden. My uncle is a doctor, so he might be able to treat my sweet babysitter.



Frank arrives to our house and starts treating Marie. Marie looks upset, and that is when our family starts to notice what Frank is doing.


Frank is jealous of Marie's beauty, and strength so he casts a spell on her. Frank casts a spell that causes Marie’s beauty and strength to disappear.







Frank was a bad man, everyone in our town respected Frank because of our last name “Hayden” but no one was aware of the evil he had done.

After Frank left our house, Marie tells my father about the evil Frank had done to beautiful woman who live on the reservations.


My mother Gail was mad about the things Frank had done. My mother talks to my father, because he is the sheriff who protects the town from evil.



My father does not do anything to Frank, because he is his brother. This makes both me and my mom angry.



He is my brother!
The next day, our family went to our grandparents house. The house was a huge ranch. I saw my Uncle Frank, and grandfather talking outside. I wonder why my grandfather was talking to that evil man.










My grandfather's favorite child was Frank, even through he was a bad man. That's when my father stepped in, and started telling my grandfather the bad spells Frank puts on woman.
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In order to making this novel into a children's book. I had to change adult topics into topics a kid can read. In the novel Frank molested woman. In my children's book I changed that into Frank casting a spell on them. The spell causes the woman to loose their strength and beauty, and those are similar effects that happen to someone after they get raped. I also changed Frank committing suicide into him casting a spell on himself. These events in the novel were topics that would not appear in a children's book. So substituted them with topics children actually read.

72 years ago in the year of 1948,I lived in a little town, Bentrock, Montana. I was 12 years old and lived in a large country home. I lived with my mom, my dad, and my babysitter Marie Little Soldier.




Marie Little Soldier is my beautiful babysitter whom I love deeply. She lives with us, so I get to see her a lot.


I hear Marie Little Soldier coughing down the hall, so I go and see her. She is coughing loudly, so I start to get a little scared.


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