Throughout my life I have gone through many things, the good thing is that I have overcome them with humility and pride

I have been in Bogotá all my life, 13 years ago, when I was a child (PRONUNCIATION), I had a bad experience, I broken my HAND boneS, especially the small finger.

another experience was when I was a child. I liked go to with my cousin Federico in October, on Halloween. 10 years ago I had an experience. When I went out to order sweets(CANDIES), I ran into Don Jediondo, he had a house in a condominium from Cota, for which i was invited by my uncles. i fell(FELT)   very happy.

When I was a child I remember a tamaguchi, I played at  school, all the people and especially the children played with a tamaguchi. I have the tamaguchi saved in my closet yet, it's a good memory from yesterday.

Other IMPORTANT part of my life important also is the music, in 2009 Michael Jackson has died for medical circumstances. Always I have loveD to much the music of Michael Jackson. In the day of his dead, I danced at school a song  in  his memory "thriller". i listend TO his music yet.

1 year ago, i travelled to San andres, i've never thought how wonderful the seven color sea is.  was my best experience

Well done, please check the corrections 

blue---pronunciation

red----something is wrong

green---- coherence

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