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"Adventures with Blue and Yellow"

Blue and Yellow, two giraffes, go on an adventure to trade for limited edition hoof shoes. They face a moral dilemma and learn about karma.  
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Jayden Phu
I liked the strong friendship that Blue and Yellow maintained throughout the story. Even when they had conflicting ideas and thoughts, Blue still forgave him and helped him do the right thing. My favorite part was when Blue went to collect the resources and pay the elderly giraffe back for what his friend Yellow did, even though he wasn't responsible. I also liked how the elderly giraffe gave them even better shoes out of the kindness of his heart, even after Yellow stole from him.
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Emma Gluski
This plot was very creative! I like how it is very engaging, every page made me want to know what would happen next. I also like that the giraffe was blue. The values were used in the story very well!
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Lera Lee
I enjoyed your story. It was a smooth read and the ending was quite nice. I also like how you divided the text on each page into segments, making it visually appealing. Also, Your three principles were included in a way that works well with the story and furthers the plot. I think this was great. :)
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