It was a beautiful day, the flowers were blooming as if  they were the sun,and the grass was green and full of life. Something felt wrong though, it did not feel right, it was a feeling that felt like something big was going to happen. 

    It was the afternoon and Eliza was out in the field. Her eyes were as blue as the purest water and her hair was a golden color. Her shin was a tan color and she was tall for her age. She always wore pants and a shirt and did not like dresses. Eliza was kind and she loved animals. Her voice was soothing and sweet.

     It was suddenly night. Eliza woke up to a creek. She thought it was just her door but then there was a bang and her Mom came running into her room she was beautiful and had the same hair and a soft smile. Then said with worry in her voice,"We have to get out of here now!"

    "We can't leave dad," Eliza said. 

    "He got captured," Mom sighed looking as if she was never going to smile again. Then she whistled and a horse with wings came out from the clouds! "Jump on," Mom said.

    As they were up in the air, there was a castle in the clouds and the clouds seemed to cover it in a blanket. "Wow" Eliza said not taking her eyes off of it.

    Inside, it was beautiful there was a staircase in the middle of the room. Then she could hear a sound it sounded like feet coming down the stairs and then she saw a person.  

    "Mother," her Mom calmly said. 

    "This must be Eliza," her grandma that she never knew about said. 

    Suddenly, when they were all talking they herd a bang! "I have a place in the back where we can hide," Eliza's grandma shouted. Then they were all fallowing her running towards a wall that opened when she put a crystal  in it. Then the leaves moved and there was a door. 

Then they got inside and shut it. Then it was dark except for a little crack in the door.

    When Eliza looked through it she saw people with black capes and they had deep voices. then one of then said something that was so deep she could not hear. Then she herd one of them say something to loud. It was about her dad he was still alive!